I wish
I was bit less hyperactive
And could bring an end to the attacks of its lethal claws
I wish I was not born impulsive
And could save myself from succumbing to my own flaws
I wish
I could induce more optimism
into this mentally harassed body
I wish people would welcome existentialism
Before this 'mind-fuck' degrades my body
I wish
The skies were clear
and the societies had no barrier
I could enjoy the uncorrupted emotions
of stargazing and pure lust
I wish
I was a lone wolf
in a constant search of my better half
Far away in the icy alps
Taking occasional afternoon laps
I wish
I was a prairie wind
and not the grassland itself
blowing over uneven horizons
pleasing the nature whores
I wish
This individualistic me
Never bows down before any mighty 'she'
Whatsoever the threat she inflicts
I wish I could let her know
About the calmness before a blizzard strikes
Thank you for reading the doggerel :P
I was bit less hyperactive
And could bring an end to the attacks of its lethal claws
I wish I was not born impulsive
And could save myself from succumbing to my own flaws
I wish
I could induce more optimism
into this mentally harassed body
I wish people would welcome existentialism
Before this 'mind-fuck' degrades my body
I wish
The skies were clear
and the societies had no barrier
I could enjoy the uncorrupted emotions
of stargazing and pure lust
I wish
I was a lone wolf
in a constant search of my better half
Far away in the icy alps
Taking occasional afternoon laps
I wish
I was a prairie wind
and not the grassland itself
blowing over uneven horizons
pleasing the nature whores
I wish
This individualistic me
Never bows down before any mighty 'she'
Whatsoever the threat she inflicts
I wish I could let her know
About the calmness before a blizzard strikes
Thank you for reading the doggerel :P
Amazing it is! :D
ReplyDeleteI wish. <3 :P
@Aakanksha..Hehe thanks a lot :)
ReplyDeletenice one :)
ReplyDelete" Far away in the icy alps
Taking occasional afternoon laps"
is the best line :)
@Mohit..Thanks a lot bro :)
ReplyDeleteYour comment cheer me up so much! :D
Totally heart it.. awesome stuff.
ReplyDeleteGlad to have found you at Indiblogger. your newest follower and aregular visitot now
cheers
kajal
@Kajal...Thanks a lot dear :) I am glad you liked my poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton!
Hi :)
ReplyDeleteIt's the kind of poem that a reader should read and silently enjoy while the poet alone understands the reasons behind it... Are you perhaps inspired by Wordsworth?
@Asra...you got me. Nah not inspired by Wordsworth, there was no Wordsworthian grandeur in this verse. Again all thanks to Mohit broda :)
ReplyDeleteWhoa... this is one is totally awesome bro :)
ReplyDeleteyou've developed so much since the last time I read your post, keep up the good work :D
@Shri...Your comment overwhelmed me man :D All thanks to you people :)
ReplyDeleteNice One Bhai :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it !!
Thanks Ishu bhai :D
ReplyDeleteYou have improved so much in such a less time! This poem is undoubtedly one of your best works! Really enjoyed it.. :)
ReplyDeleteKeep it up!
Thanks a lot Prachi :D Your comment floored me :D
ReplyDeleteKeep supporting :D
it's just amazing as always.
ReplyDeletebut its your best post ever what i have read till date.
keep it up bhai!
Thanks a lot Niharika :)
ReplyDeleteYou have unknowingly captured all my ardent desires!:) Great read, and love the poetry.
ReplyDelete@Rohit Thanks a lot brother :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant Stuff.
ReplyDeleteit had many glimpses of pure awesomeness.
Hehe Thanks a lot bro :)
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